Sunday, November 28, 2010

time in a bottle, revisited

* Sorry, this is going to be unbelievably long and rambly! *

not really a prosperity blog, or anything like it, anymore...

It's been a long time since I wrote that post on time and aging, and a lot of things have changed in the almost-three years I've been writing this story. So if this opens a new era in the keeping of LH time, then it's something that actually happened quite a while ago. If you compare my rounds 2076/78 to rounds 2080 and especially 2082, I'm sure you'll see the huge difference ;)

I don't play/write my families in anything resembling equal turns. In fact, I rarely get the chance to really and truly "play" my families at all anymore. I'm fine with that, by the way. I have just as much fun using the game to tell my story as I do playing it for fun. And in the midst of posing, I do try to steal a couple minutes to just "play" them like the little pixel dollies they are. If I do manage to take any cues from gameplay anymore, it'll be found in these little 5-minute play sessions.

This story (and all of its story parts) has plenty of momentum, for the next two rounds, and into the spin-off even after the Lakeside Heights portion of the story is finished. So I thought we could talk about the way things started here, and what things have become. And I'll go ahead and finally say out loud that we're leaving that "prosperity blog" structure, which in honesty, we left quite a while ago.

You won't notice any difference as you read, of course, because we haven't been following that prosperity structure for at least the whole of round 2082. And the way I'll likely continue to do things is the way I've been writing this current round - five or six seasons to a round, and focusing on the development of a few prominent storylines each season.

First, I blame it on Piper and Hayden. And Dallas too. These were my first real mini-updates of actual substance, and the first times I needed to tell a story outside the structure of everyone's slotted "turn". Then I blame it on Micah and Mariah. Theirs was the first time I had so much story to tell that I had to split an update into parts. And I loved it! It gave me so much more room to really dig into the characters and situations. Being a storyteller before I was a prosperity hood blogger, you can guess that I found this new balance particularly appealing. And, if I might say so, it made the story much richer.

So that's when things changed around here, through the early parts of round 2080, which was nearly two years ago. So while we aren't changing much more right now, there are a few things we are changing.

First, I'm thinking that some of my quieter families will no longer get a once-a-round update. This is really the biggest difference between what I was doing before (gameplay-focused prosperity blog) and what I'm doing now (story-focused neighborhood drama). I have so many families with actual stories to write about that there's no point really trying hard to make up stories for families that don't already have one. If they decide to take part in the story again later, then so be it. But I've just got plenty to write about as it is, you know? I'll be following the stories and characters that inspire me, and not really worrying about who gets equal screentime or not.

Also, a couple of my families are going to live in short stories this round (if I get around to revising them...), rather than take their turn in the round. But they're not part of any of our major storylines, so I doubt you'll even know they were missing. And just a couple of the other quieter ones will fall to the background, still make appearances as family and friends, and they'll still grow up, go to school, etc. They'll basically become something like semi-playables.

Downgrade, lol!

the unbearable slowness of time...

With the addition of more and more mini-updates (which are often not so mini at all!), and large story sets broken into many parts, you've likely noticed that time has slowed way down. Note that the first twelve story pieces of this season all took place in the same story-week... and that they took me over two months to write. This season is a bit top-heavy, being that half of the stories take place in the month of December. But time will not always move so slowly (or we'd never get through it all!). The second half of this current season will cover the months of January, February, and March, all in about the same number of stories. Sometimes, like real life, there's just a lot more going on.

Given the slowness, and the close proximity of time between one story and the next, I've started to put exact dates in the date headings. This is something that's probably more helpful for me than it will be for you, and I'm not sure you'll even notice, really. But I usually work them out for myself anyway, and in the past few stories, I've found myself wanting to count back weeks for a real space of time, or needing to know that the past eight stories all occurred in the same space of a week or something.

Have you ever seen a calendar for the year 2083?

Well now you have! A real and actual calendar of the real and actual month of December, 2083! I had no idea that Liquid Story Binder could actually do this, lol! But it can! And I find this very helpful to me, since I have all these stories going on, running into each other and clashing and intersecting.

The screen above is from "forget what we're told, part 2". I've listed the primary happenings of each scene in the update, but also, at the bottom, you'll notice that I listed the happenings of things going on in the background outside the story as well. I'll use this as a reference point if I ever need to know that a particular character couldn't have been in two different places at the same time. Also, some days have two or three different stories listed (like Jodie's story, ambitions of teamwork, broken into three parts which all took place in about the space of an hour, lol!).

So you can notice the dates, if you want. Or you can ignore them. It's just a nerdy fascination of mine, having my characters and stories exist in a real and concrete world with painfully intricate time, lol! :p

And since we have real and actual dates...

birthdays, real and actual birthdays!!!

I went ahead and gave all my sims/characters real and actual birthdates!!! This is probably the biggest current change you'll notice around here. I did this a few weeks ago, and it was surprisingly a lot less time-consuming that I thought it would be. So now all of your favorite LH residents have a real birth date, month, and year, and their actual birthdates are all listed in the profiles.

This is another product of the slowing time, that it actually makes sense to have birthdays. If I were bombing through this story as fast as I used to, it probably wouldn't make sense.

I'll do a birthdays post each story-month for those Sims having a birthday, and like the New Year's updates, they will be actual stories too. You'll get to see this in action with tonight's update, and the first birthday post is from Stephanie. The rest of my December birthdays will be listed at the bottom of her story.

Then each story month, I'll go through and update the ages of those who have birthdays that month, and feature one of them in a story.

I haven't had the chance to work out how I'll do physical age-ups yet, but I imagine the way I'll do it is this: toddlers (8 months), children (4 years), teens (12 years), and elders (60 years), will age up on their actual birthday. Young adults and adults will transition on their graduation/drop-out day, so their ages will vary at the time of transition, but will likely still be around 18 for YA and around 22 for adults.

and something on tense...

I promised some people I would talk about my choice of POV and tense in Lakeside Heights. (That was weeks ago I promised that, sorry!)

POV:
I use several narrators, third person - because hell, there's like 23 main characters or something! I don't have the luxury of developing 23-or-so distinct first-person narrative voices (though I do try to give them their own voice for dialogue), so I use an authorial voice for the whole.

I love writing stories from several points of view though, and if I ever write a substantially-sized story with just one narrator, I think it'll be cause for alarm. Seriously, I am fascinated by telling stories from different angles. I write single narrators for short stories sometimes, but that's just because of the space constraints.

(Hmmm... *wonders if I could write a short story with two narrators?*)

Tense:
Lakeside Heights is written in present tense for its immediacy. Each entry is its own precise moment in a long chronology of time. Each entry takes place in a very precise day, month, and year, different from the one before it and the one after it. Each entry is rather short (compared to the big picture) and is precisely in the present, and thus, I use present tense.

Of course, I'm not really sure I was so aware of that choice when I started this story. I was just kind of winging it, and figured out how it made sense after ;)

ETA: further notes on birthdays and school kids...

I had to move some of my kids around in their school grades. A lot of this has to do with whether they've had their birthday or not at the time of this change. For those with winter and spring birthdays, it became an issue of either pushing them forward in age, or holding them back. Some of them would essentially then get two birthdays in a row, or no birthday at all for a full year, and that messes up all my friendships and planned romances, lol! We can't have that ;)

The ones held back have more to do with their emotional maturity than their intelligence. So it's not like they failed a grade or anything, lol!

For future children, I'll have them start kindergarten when they're 5, and I'll divide the summer birthdays around how many I have in each grade.

moving ahead:
Raine, Zach, and Felicity move to Kindergarten.
Bianca, Elliot, Connor, and Shaun move to 1st grade.
Devon moves to 2nd grade.
Sam moves to 7th grade.
Delphie, Dakota, and Robbie to 8th grade.
Hazel, Natty, and Charlie move to 9th grade.
Isaiah to 10th grade.
Melissa to 11th grade.
Lucy to 12th grade.

held in same grade:
Elijah, Amy, Blair, Fiona, Melody, Liza, Sarah, Cecilia, Ryanne, Angelo, Abby, Julia, Laney, Gabby

20 comments:

  1. Wow, it is amazing the time you put into your sims and stories. It takes this hobby to a whole new level and I admire you for that. Please keep with Lakeside Heights . . . OMG I just looked and I have been reading your blog almost 2 1/2 years! Kudos to you and good luck with your changes!

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  2. Mrs. Stuffy, what you all really mean to say is that it takes my hobby and turns it into a strange and delusional obsession? lol! ;)

    Thank you though! I'm so honored to have had you reading for so long! :D

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  3. So some of the less playable families might still end up with their own stories again, if inspiration strikes? You have such a big, vibrant neighbourhood and it'd be sad if some families got forgotten! I love how you work Lakeside though, and you certainly have enough main characters to be getting along with. It's so amazingly in depth. I keep trying to be as in-depth but I get distracted by pretty CC, haha.

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  4. Zoe, sure! I'd never refuse to write any story that happens to strike my fancy! :)

    It'd be no different than I am with my semi-playables really. Like Chandler and Jane had their own little spotlight recently. But I'll go ahead and name names so we can talk about it more concretely. The Lind family is one of them, particularly Nathan's branch of it. I know, they're so sweet, and the girls are adorable! But really, they just don't have much of a story. While on the other hand, his sister Aurora (Harris) does, and will continue to have her own pretty prominent storyline in the future. So it makes sense for me to go ahead and focus on her story, and let him and his family, and their parents, be supporting cast to her story.

    I'll likely do a quick little picspam update for them and his parents still though, and in place of a story for them, I'll probably let it focus on Aurora instead.

    Oh believe me, I get distracted by the pretty CC too, lol!

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  5. You just proved your point because I had to quickly check who that branch of the Lind family were. That's the problem with happy, stable Sim familes - they're nice to have around but they're no fun to write!

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  6. Aw man... I'm looking directly at you, Clarice and Blake Miller!

    Haha, are you going to finish this round's planned updates, that way we could have a goodbye. I really like Ally, Nathan, Bianca and Julia! (didn't ahve to check, woohoo!)

    And Audrey had her own update!!! I known im in the minority but I've been looking forward to seeing some of these families for awhile :(

    But I also understand your viewpoint completely. You have stories to focus on, and why waste time on saying a bunch of families are happy.

    p.s. they'll still be an old people home update, right? I do love Nina Shaw-Gothier.

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  7. Interesting, it makes sense to call LH a story-focused neighborhood drama instead of a gameplay-focused prosperity blog. It makes more sense especially with your style of focusing on a select group of sims. I'm a bit confused, you mention that "into the spin-off even after the Lakeside Heights portion of the story is finished". Does that mean LH will end after a while?

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  8. Zoe, lol! See, I told you you'd barely miss them ;)

    Billy, nope, the Miller's are safe! They're in a quiet spot right now, but they've got plenty of story ahead of them ;)

    Audrey still gets her story! And everything I have listed on the round page right now is still a go. Though Pat and Lara Nova are one of those short stories I was talking about, so if I don't manage to make something come of that before their turn comes up, I might password lock it and post it on my website for y'all to read anyway.

    The elders usually have story going on with their grandchildren at the very least, so we'll probably keep that update in the future.

    The only ones I'm really struggling with this round are the Linds and the Thompsons. I think where it goes wrong for them is that they're not really involved with any of my ongoing storylines. Or well, I suppose Nathan could become involved in his sister's story - and probably will in the future - but especially right now, there isn't much going on for him, or his family, and when I have so many other stories to get to, it doesn't make sense for me to add yet another storyline to the mix, just for the sake of having something for them to do.

    But that's how Mariah and Micah will survive being downgraded (sounds so scary, lol!) even though their story is kind of resolved right now. I see Mariah especially being largely involved in at least two more major ongoing storylines soon, and they also have story possibilities of their own in the future. And well, I've kind of already said that I'm in love with seeing Quinn grow up, so that helps, lol! (There, now you know one of my families coming to the spin-off!)

    But I don't really want to send away these other families either, or say goodbye even, because I love them being a part of the neighborhood. And they'll still be around, but just in the background.

    Apple, I'm glad it makes sense. It's definitely something different now than it was when I started it. Not that either one of those things is good or bad - they just are what they are, I think. There are plenty great examples of both in our Sim-storytelling community.

    Yes, LH has a finite lifespan. I thought for sure I'd mentioned that before, lol! Maybe I did, but not here. I know for sure I said it in my babble thread at VSS.

    I have two more full rounds planned, plus one ending season, and that will end this version of the story. Beyond that, I plan on taking a select few of the families to a spin-off story that I'm 100% sure will happen (some of the first stories are even already first-drafted), and about 85% sure I'll illustrate with TS3.

    But knowing my pace, that's five years worth of story-time, which will probably be about five years in RL time too? OMG, I write so slow, lol!

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  9. Noooo, maybe that's what I meant BUT between you and I and PLEASE don't let my husband or children know this . . . but I am so jealous of you and your sims!
    One of my friends on Facebook defriended me cause I took a pic of me with my plumb bob flash drive over my head. They'll just never understand *sigh*

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  10. Mrs. Stuffy, oh man, now that's not a friend worth having! lol! I'm very lucky that my hubby still loves me, even knowing about my ridiculous Sim habit! :)

    (For the record though, he does think I'm crazy, lol!)

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  11. Yes, you've mentioned that LH will end. Which I cried a bit, inside. LOL I'm sure you can make S3 work for you, but they are so fugly and make my head hurt. I'm not sure I'll be able to read your drama filled lives anymore. *sobs* See, Laura, now I have to work up my gag reflex just so I can read your blog still. ROFL

    And the toddler ading thing, I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who hates having 8 month olds still being held like a bew born. I've started aging my babies up around 8 and 9 months to toddlers as well. It makes more sense. Normally, kids are walking or at least trying to walk by the time they are 12 months.

    You moving away from a legacy aspect and into a storytelling aspect, I think was kind of expecting. And I'm glad you have. You have given us so much with the little characters you have created.

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  12. Riverdale, oooh, see I thought I was weird for aging up the toddlers so soon, so I'm glad to hear you do it too! Because there's that really great crawling stage between about 7 and 12 months, and if you age them to toddler at 12 months, then it really doesn't make sense for them to be crawling anymore.

    Oh, TS3 Sims can look okay, I promise you! Have you seen Lunar's Ruin? Those are *not* ugly Sims! Quite the opposite in fact, lol! It takes a lot of CC, but then TS2 Sims need a lot of CC to look okay too ;)

    Thanks, I'm glad you approve of the storytelling style. It's not anything new, really, but I'm just saying it out loud now.

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  13. Riverdale, proof: look at Lunar's Sims in Testing too. Especially the one with Brandon! OMG, you can't tell me that Sim-man isn't gorgeous!!! *pixel-swoon* :D

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  14. I agree - the time for TS3 sims looking fugly is over. (I'm looking at you Corbin WIP on VSS forum)
    And have a look at MDP's Jack (fans self) in The Gang.

    OK - back from drooling.

    Laura - to be honest, I thought that this was what you were doing all along! LOL Glad to see you've spelled it out. But Girl! 5 more years! You won't be doing the spin off in TS3 - it'll be TS4 then! LMAO

    Edited: because I'm completely incapable of working out how to link urls in my comment.

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  15. I read what you were saying about birthdays at N99 and wondered how you'd handle the physical age-ups, so I'm glad you mentioned that!

    I have noticed that you haven't really been prosperity-style for a good while now! It works well though - being able to go back to a family whenever you need to or skip over families you don't have anything to say for.

    And seeing you've said before that you've planned an end of sorts for LH, I'm kind of glad you write slowly. It means lots more time with LH for me!

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  16. Kiri, you could be right, it might be TS4, lol!

    5 story-years is a lot of story, but after some of these current stories end and thin out, I should be able to pick up the pace a bit. Not all of the stories will span the entire length of the 5 years, and this hella-long month of December 2083 is really abnormal even for my slow pace. I can't see myself having another month so jam-packed with stories.

    So I hope I get it done in faster than 5 years RL time, lol! But hey, if it ends up being TS4, then so be it! It's getting written one way or another ;)

    And on the storytelling style, I've been writing it this way for a long time, but not since the beginning. The first two rounds (76 and 78) were really more gameplay-driven, and though I would arrange the families as well as I could to create story arcs, they still only had their one turn per round, so it was hard to really dig in deep like I do now.

    Hell, back when I was doing it that way, I used to finish a 2 year round in 2 or 3 RL months! That would get me through the 5 years a lot faster, lol!

    Carla, yeah, I figured that I would pretty much have to work the YA and A age-ups around uni school year still. I really couldn't figure out a way to do it otherwise that wouldn't be too much hassle.

    I knew some of you wouldn't be too sad if it took me a good long time to finish out this story, lol! When I do make the transition though, however it ends up happening, I promise I'll make it worth it for you all! :)

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  17. Kiri, and another note, on however long it takes me to finish out LH. When I jump into the spin-off, I'm going to need to have a full and thriving neighborhood ready for them to move into, and I'd like it to be as rich and full of history as LH was when I started. So I'll probably need plenty of time to build it up before I get started. I worked on LH for two years before I started blogging about it.

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  18. Nope, I still have not been converted. The wannabe simulated people in bootleg Sim 3 still are ugly. Granted, people have managed to make them look a tab better than before, but they still make me gag. No getting around it. And the bad thing? I still by the eps since my kids play them. ROFL Who knows, maybe one day they will grow on me. But they are not sims, just a shadow of the wonderfulness that I have grown to love (sims 2). LOL

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  19. Riverdale, ah, you're hopeless, lol!

    All, I edited to add some further notes on the birthdays and how it's going to affect my kids in school, so check the end of the post for that! ;)

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  20. Laura, you have just made me download Liquid Story Binder.

    THANK YOU!!!!

    *does the dance of happiness*

    You have just solved all of my problems with my story.

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